Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, February 26, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Nate
ReplyDeleteI really like how you listened to feedback to help improve your blog post - like adding in pictures to your Google Slide, adding in your reflection of your work and making sure that your Google Slide fits the space on your blog. Well done also on doing a lot of this at home : )
For your next presentations that have information on them, see if you can write the facts using your own words so that it is simpler than what you often read on websites.
Keep up the amazing effort and dedication to your learning, Nate!